Writing the law school personal statement

Students often ask me, “What makes a perfect law school personal statement?” The answer is hard to put into words, because it’s different for each applicant. There’s no “magic formula” for a powerful law school personal statement. However, there are five qualities that every PS should have. And, chances are, if you have these five qualities in yours, it’s going to be an excellent law school personal statement.

Let me share the five-must have elements: 1. A Compelling Opening Simply put, your opening shouldn’t be boring. It should make the reader feel like they’ll miss out on something great if they don’t keep reading! To do this, set the scene for them. Make them feel like they’re not just reading your PS, but they’re actually a part of it. 2. Descriptive Details The way to ace the “show, don’t tell” approach to essay-writing is to include details. Here’s an example: instead of saying that your science labs were fun but challenging, use details to show how they were fun but challenging. State that students rarely scored higher than a B, but you learned how certain compounds interacted with one another and used the scientific method to prove your theories. 3. An Example of Grit One of the must-have qualities of any law school personal statement is a demonstration of drive and determination. Which circumstances have you had to overcome to succeed? Show your reader how you’ve excelled despite facing challenges.  4. Proof You’re a Good Candidate Which unique qualities would make you a desirable student at the law school of your choice? Don’t simply provide a laundry list of your qualities or extracurriculars. Instead, showcase what makes you truly unique by tying it into the overall message you’re delivering in your law school personal statement.  5. A Powerful Closing The closing of your law school personal statement is just as important (if not more so) than your opening. You should leave your reader with a strong lasting impression of you. If you feel like your law school personal statement falls flat at the end, take another look. How can you find a powerful way to tie it all together at the end of your essay? Keep in mind that this is not simply a “checklist.” Weaving each of these elements into your law school personal statement can be challenging! If you’re having difficulties, don’t worry – you’re not alone. Take a look at my law school admissions articles. And remember, it’s always okay to walk away and come back to it again with fresh eyes! Talk soon, Steve P.S. Even though I share a lot of facts with you about the law school personal statement, I also still hear mistruths from time to time. There’s one particular lie that’s very dangerous to believe, and some of the students I’ve worked with in the past have almost gotten caught up in it. I’ll share it in my next article, so be sure to take a look!

Recommended Resources: 1. Law School Admissions Coaching Get personalized 1-1 help on every aspect of the law school admission process -- or just the law school personal statement. 2. Law School Admissions Guide I've written a concise guide to the law school admission process with tips on completing every aspect of your applications from start to finish. It's a small price to pay for a whole lot of guidance, and it's short enough that you'll actually read the whole thing. 3. Law School Admissions Cheat Sheet Quick-reference guide for the law school personal statement, the "Why X?" essay, and the law school résumé. (You can also get it with the LSAT Cheat Sheets.)

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Answering law school personal statement questions

When you’re applying to law school, it’s not always easy to track down the answers you need. Even though you have pre-law advisors, websites, and perhaps even friends you can ask about the process, each application is different. More importantly, each student is different. Your law school application experience is entirely unique and won’t be exactly the same as your friends’ or your siblings’.

For this reason, it can feel challenging to learn the “right” way to do things. You may have questions, and it might feel like the answers are out of reach.   That’s where I come in. As you may have guessed by now, I specialize in the law school personal statement. And chances are, if you have a question, I have an answer for you. (Even if I don’t have it right away, I’ll find it!) For now, here are three of the most common questions I get asked about the law school personal statement: 1. I don’t even know where I want to go to school. Should I still start my law school personal statement? Yes! Even if you don’t know exactly where you want to go – and aren’t sure which essay topic you’ll write about – you’ll find many schools ask similar questions. For this reason, if you start brainstorming ideas by taking a look at common topics, you’ll be way ahead when you eventually do decide on a school. 2. How long should my law school personal statement be? First off, it’s important to precisely follow the instructions on the application. If it has a maximum word count, don’t go over it. But your word count shouldn’t fall too far under that maximum, either. If you’re not using up most of the allotted words, you’re probably not getting your point across. Aim to be just below the maximum word count - never over it!  3. When should I start the law school personal statement? You might think my answer would be, “as soon as possible!” But realistically, you shouldn’t start it too early. Thinking about the law school personal statement too far in advance might be counterproductive. You’ll have a more developed perspective by the time you’re ready to seriously start applying to law school.  For this reason, I recommend that you don’t start brainstorming topics any earlier than 5-6 months before you submit your law school application. Definitely don’t wait any longer than 3-4 months before submitting your application to start your essay. You’ll need ample time to generate ideas, actually write an essay draft, and get feedback so you can edit it. Do you have any other questions about the law school personal statement I haven’t covered here? If so, I’d be happy to answer them! Just reach out. Until next time, Steve P.S. My next article is one you won’t want to miss. I’m going to share the five must-have elements for an incredible law school personal statement, so keep an eye out!

Recommended Resources: 1. Law School Admissions Coaching Get personalized 1-1 help on every aspect of the law school admission process -- or just the law school personal statement. 2. Law School Admissions Guide I've written a concise guide to the law school admission process with tips on completing every aspect of your applications from start to finish. It's a small price to pay for a whole lot of guidance, and it's short enough that you'll actually read the whole thing. 3. Law School Admissions Cheat Sheet Quick-reference guide for the law school personal statement, the "Why X?" essay, and the law school résumé. (You can also get it with the LSAT Cheat Sheets.)

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Why law school applications are stressful (and how to fix it)

There are a few big reasons why applying to law school is so stressful. For one, there are deadlines. Knowing you have to complete a task by a specific date can cause alarm. That’s a problem, because the closer you get to your deadline, the more pressure you’ll feel, and the more your creativity will be impacted. (That’s why I always recommend starting the law school application as early as possible – see my advice for beginning the law school application process.)

Another cause of stress comes from not knowing how to write the perfect law school personal statement. But you’ve come to the right place, and by now, you’ve probably collected lots of insights from my articles about how to craft a brilliant PS all your own. So, cross this stressor off your list, too. Even if you need more help, you can always reach out to me. But there’s one final aspect of the law school admissions process that causes stress, and unfortunately, it’s not one that we can solve. There’s no way to tell just how much your law school personal statement matters compared to, say, your LSAT score or GPA. And it doesn’t look like that will change any time soon. Admission officers even say that transparency is impossible, because each student and law school has unique qualities. So, part of the stress of applying to law school is simply coming to terms with the unknown aspects of the process. We’ll never be able to know for sure to what degree each law school – or even how much each admission officer – weighs your law school personal statement over other factors. But one thing is for sure: the law school personal statement does matter. Google “How much does the law school personal statement matter” and it will yield all sorts of conflicting results. Don’t bother reading them. Like I said, at present, there’s no way to quantify exactly how much it matters. But consider this: I’ve seen dozens of success stories from students whose LSAT scores and GPAs could have been better. They had their sights set on competitive schools, and perhaps their general application alone wouldn’t have been enough to help them get into these top universities. Yet, they used the law school personal statement as an opportunity to show admissions officers that they’re more than numbers and grades. I bet you’re more than that, too. Shouldn’t you use the opportunity to show your law school of choice that you’re more? For now, we can’t erase the unknowns. But what we do have the power to do is write the best possible law school personal statement for the greatest chance at getting accepted. Think of it this way: the law school personal statement could matter even more than we realize in admissions decisions. If that’s the case, it’s not worth leaving anything up to chance. Write an incredible law school personal statement, submit it, and then ease your mind knowing that you did the best you possibly could in applying to your top-choice law school. That’s how you avoid stress, even in the face of unknowns. Until next time, Steve P.S. I’ll share with you another thing that matters: closely following the application’s directions. Some students get so wrapped up in their law school application essays that they accidentally overlook critical factors like word count and other requirements. Don’t make these simple mistakes. Always take the time to triple-check the prompt to make sure you’ve fulfilled all of the requirements completely.

Recommended Resources: 1. Law School Admissions Coaching Get personalized 1-1 help on every aspect of the law school admission process -- or just the law school personal statement. 2. Law School Admissions Guide I've written a concise guide to the law school admission process with tips on completing every aspect of your applications from start to finish. It's a small price to pay for a whole lot of guidance, and it's short enough that you'll actually read the whole thing. 3. Law School Admissions Cheat Sheet Quick-reference guide for the law school personal statement, the "Why X?" essay, and the law school résumé. (You can also get it with the LSAT Cheat Sheets.)

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Law school application essays - “why our school?”

Each law school application essay topic presents its own unique challenges, but many students I work with feel that the “Why X Law School” prompt is the most difficult. I’ll share a bit of their experiences to explain why, along with tips to help you tackle this topic.

1. The Reasons That First Come to Mind Aren’t Always the Best Maybe you like the law school’s location, or maybe you were drawn most to the updated dorm rooms. Of course, you probably have dozens of reasons for wanting to go to a particular law school, but the ones that come to mind aren’t always the ones that will make the best impact on admissions officers. How to Overcome It: Don’t start writing immediately after reading this prompt. Instead, perform a brainstorming session where you list all the reasons why you want to be a student at your law school of choice. Think broadly, considering as many aspects of the law school experience as possible. Include clinics and journals and other forms of student life, as well as academics. Explain how the school’s program would allow her to pursue your interests and goals, and how specific classes and extracurriculars would support your unique interests. 2. The Desire You Have to Go There is Difficult to Put Into Words Did you just get a feeling when you visited your top-choice law school that made you want to be there? Oftentimes, these thoughts and emotions can be difficult to put into words.  How to Overcome It: Instead of trying to describe the feeling itself, think instead about the factors that made you feel a certain way. Did you sit in on a lecture and see how well a professor kept their students’ interest? Did the welcoming, diverse student body make you feel right at home? 3. You Also Have to Prove Why You’re a Good Fit for the School Remember, you’re not just explaining why you want to attend your law school of choice. You must also explain why the law school should want to have you attending their school. Many students overlook this factor in the “Why X Law School” essay, and instead focus only on the school.  How to Overcome It: Explain which unique factors you’d bring to the law school. Do you have drive, passion, and dedication? Show your reader how you embody these unique qualities. If possible, try to link your personal values to the law school's mission statement to make a compelling case as to why you’d be a great addition to the student body. Now that you know how to tackle the biggest challenges from the “Why X Law School” essay, it doesn’t seem so difficult anymore, does it? Until next time, Steve P.S. There’s no getting around it – even with the right information, applying to law school is still stressful. In my next article, I’ll share with you exactly what makes the process so stress-inducing, and how to overcome it by writing an excellent law school application essay.

Recommended Resources: 1. Law School Admissions Coaching Get personalized 1-1 help on every aspect of the law school admission process -- or just the law school personal statement. 2. Law School Admissions Guide I've written a concise guide to the law school admission process with tips on completing every aspect of your applications from start to finish. It's a small price to pay for a whole lot of guidance, and it's short enough that you'll actually read the whole thing. 3. Law School Admissions Cheat Sheet Quick-reference guide for the law school personal statement, the "Why X?" essay, and the law school résumé. (You can also get it with the LSAT Cheat Sheets.)

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Law school admissions: transfer students

The law school personal statement is difficult for any student, but for transfers, it poses special challenges. There’s the dilemma of addressing the “elephant in the room:” yes, you are coming from another law school. But that doesn’t mean you’ve failed in your educational journey thus far. In fact, law school transfer students may have unique advantages in the admissions process. They’re already more seasoned than other incoming students. They know what they don’t want in an educational setting, and they’re also proving themselves to be dedicated to overcoming challenges. Think of it this way: you didn’t decide to quit school when your first option didn’t work out. You’re simply taking a different route – one that will give you better tools for reaching your end goal. Now that you know your decision by no means makes you any less valid an applicant than your peers, it’s time to translate this idea into your own law school personal statement. But how? And is it really that important? As it turns out, acing law school application essays is critically important for students transferring law schools.  So, if you want to increase your odds of getting accepted by your law school of choice, you’ll have to provide a compelling law school personal statement. Here’s how: 1. Address the Transfer We tend to want to shy away from uncomfortable topics. Yet, the law school personal statement is your opportunity to explain why you’re transferring. Avoiding the topic will only leave admission officers wondering, and they could draw the wrong conclusion. Explain your decision clearly, presenting the reasons why the previous law school wasn’t for you. However, avoid blaming the school, any professors, or other factors which could present the law school in a bad light.  2. Prove Your Worth Next, it’s time to show your reader why you deserve a shot in the law school admissions process. What makes you unique as a law student? Which qualities do you possess that would make you a valuable addition to the student body? What are your goals for the future, and what positive impact have you already made during your education? 3. End on a Future-Focused Note Once you’ve addressed your reason for transferring as well as the factors that make you a unique, desirable student, wrap up the essay on a future-focused note. Here’s a final sentence from an exceptional undergraduate transfer student essay (featured in a US News article): As Doctor Samuel Johnson once said, “The next best thing to knowing something is knowing where to find it.”   -A transfer student whose essay helped gain admission into Amherst College I don’t always recommend using quotes in the law school personal statement essay, but in this instance, the statement is a fitting way to keep the tone optimistic. Plus, it’s placed at the end of the personal statement, when the student has already written an entirely original piece in their own words. Thus, the quote simply wraps up what the student has said, and therefore doesn’t come across as cliché.  Ultimately, law school transfer students have some unique challenges in the admissions process, but it’s still completely possible to write a winning law school personal statement. Follow the advice above, and if you need any help, you can always feel free to reach out to me. Until next time, Steve P.S. While these are three main rules to follow for transfer students, you should still bear in mind the other basics of law school application essay-writing, like “Show, Don’t Tell.” In my next article, we’ll discuss one of the most challenging law school application essay topics, and how I helped one student ace it. Stay tuned!

Recommended Resources: 1. Law School Admissions Coaching Get personalized 1-1 help on every aspect of the law school admission process -- or just the law school personal statement. 2. Law School Admissions Guide I've written a concise guide to the law school admission process with tips on completing every aspect of your applications from start to finish. It's a small price to pay for a whole lot of guidance, and it's short enough that you'll actually read the whole thing. 3. Law School Admissions Cheat Sheet Quick-reference guide for the law school personal statement, the "Why X?" essay, and the law school résumé. (You can also get it with the LSAT Cheat Sheets.)

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Law School Application Essay: Why X?

One of the law school application essays that many students choose to write about is the one that asks, “Why our law school in particular?" There are different variations on this question, but they’re all asking the same things: What is it about this particular school or area of study that you find interesting? Why? How will this educational setting allow you to thrive, not just during your time here, but also in your career?

There are two important components to answering these questions: • First, you must describe what makes you unique. Which educational experiences do you have that show why you’re interested in a particular area of study? What will you bring to the law school that’s valuable to them? Why would they want to have you as a student? • Secondly, you must also describe why the law school is the perfect fit for you. What attracts you to that law school? Is it a specific professor? Does one of their programs have a unique advantage that you’re drawn to? In the first version of her essay for Stanford Law School, Samantha achieved only one of these components. She told us about only herself, highlighting her interest in patent law. The problem was, she left out what made Stanford Law so appealing to her. By leaving out this one essential element, she really only completed half of the essay. Even though it met the word count requirements, her original essay would have been missing a key element, and law school admission officers would have noticed.   Thankfully, Samantha came to me for help and we were able to catch the mistake in time. For her final version, Samantha's essay had clear examples of why Stanford Law would provide the perfect learning environment for her. She also cited the Dean’s philosophy and how it relates to her educational and career goals and explains how some of the school’s legal clinics truly excite her.  Could your essay be missing some key details like Samantha's was? Don’t submit it before finding out. Read about how you can answer the question, “Why do you want to go to this law school?” in my articles here, and don’t hesitate to reach out if you need any further help. Until next time, Steve P.S. There’s a lot more to writing a “Why X Law School” essay than the two bullet points I listed above. While those are the two main components, you must also incorporate the other elements of law school application essay-writing we’ve discussed so far, like “show don’t tell.” I know it’s a lot to remember, but when you have a well-written law school application essay that can help get you into your top-choice school, it will certainly pay off!

Recommended Resources: 1. Law School Admissions Coaching Get personalized 1-1 help on every aspect of the law school admission process -- or just the law school personal statement. 2. Law School Admissions Guide I've written a concise guide to the law school admission process with tips on completing every aspect of your applications from start to finish. It's a small price to pay for a whole lot of guidance, and it's short enough that you'll actually read the whole thing. 3. Law School Admissions Cheat Sheet Quick-reference guide for the law school personal statement, the "Why X?" essay, and the law school résumé. (You can also get it with the LSAT Cheat Sheets.)

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